Exact Scripts I Used to Negotiate $15K More (Twice)

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March 12, 2026 · by Rachel Wong

The first time I negotiated salary, I asked for 10% more. They said no. I said "okay." Left about $12,000/year on the table for three years. That's $36,000 I'll never get back.

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The second time, I did it right and got $15K more. The third time, another $15K. Here are the exact words I used.

The script (when they give you the offer)

Them: "We'd like to offer you $85,000 base salary."

Me: "I'm really excited about this role and the team. Thank you. I'd like to take a day to review the full package before discussing details — is that alright?"

This is critical. Never negotiate in the moment. You need time to research and prepare. Every recruiter expects this. Nobody has ever rescinded an offer because you asked for 24 hours.

The script (the next day)

Me: "Thanks again for the offer. After reviewing the market data for this role in [city] and considering my [X years] of experience with [specific relevant skill], I was expecting something closer to $100,000. Is there flexibility on the base?"

Three key elements: gratitude (not adversarial), market data (not "I want more"), and a specific number (not a range).

If they push back

Them: "We can't go that high. The budget for this role is capped at $90K."

Me: "I understand budget constraints. Could we look at other parts of the package? I'd be happy with $90K base if we could add [signing bonus / extra PTO / remote work flexibility / equity / earlier review date]."

This is where most people give up. Don't. Total compensation has many levers. A $5K signing bonus and 5 extra PTO days can be worth more than the base salary gap.

What I did wrong the first time

I said "would it be possible to maybe get a little more?" That word soup communicates zero confidence. Recruiters negotiate for a living — they can smell uncertainty. Be direct, be specific, and remember: they already want to hire you. The offer proves that. You have more leverage than you think.

If you want to practice, run your resume through our AI review first — knowing your strengths helps you negotiate from a position of confidence.

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